Saturday, November 8, 2008

Change

David stood quietly, waiting for his change, one anxious little brown hand holding tightly to the sack which held a loaf of bread.
“Change, change,” mumbled the old clerk as his slow fingers sought the right amount, “Everybody wants change, today.”
It was a comment that needed no answer, but the clerk at the next counter—a young fellow hardly out of school—responded immediately, as if irritated by the old man’s teasing:
“And why not? Sometimes change is good; it’s needed.”
The aged man stopped, his gnarled hand in mid-air, and turned around to address the clerk, whose face was full of enthusiasm and something else, satisfaction perhaps.
“He’s nothing but a socialist,” he said softly, yet not able to keep the anger out of his words.
“Is that so bad, old man,” countered the clerk, not without affection, “now maybe you'll be able to afford another pair of glasses; maybe they'll be able to save this tumbling economy.”
“Or have to close down the store, and we'll be out of a job,” said the older, with a humph.
“That’s the problem with your generation, always seeing the worst; grumbling, griping, grieving. Face it; your party lost the election. Life will go on.”
“Not all life,” said the old man, sadly, turning back around to face his little customer whose hand was still open for the change.
The exultant clerk couldn’t stop talking now, even though he found himself addressing the elder's mute and stubborn back.
“Now don’t start sounding like one of those “sanctity of life” types. As far as I’m concerned it’s a matter of definitions--semantics. This change is just what we need. You’ll see. We haven’t had a man like him in the capital before. Don’t you see how he brings people together? There’s an energy there. They love him.”
“Ay, they do,” admitted the older man as he gave the child a handful of change. Something like a shadow was on his face, and he smiled—rather sorrowfully, David thought--as he reached into a jar on the counter, pulled out a red, striped peppermint and bestowed it, as an apology for the unnecessarily long wait.
David skipped and ran all seven blocks to his crowded ghetto. Children up and down the block were putting toys away and rushing through narrow doorways into the cheerless tenement walls, and the intense evening sun made yellow stars of the dingy cobblestones.
Although he was greatly enjoying the peppermint, a parting gift from an out-of-touch generation, David felt that the younger man was right: Change is good!
It was great to be a young German in 1933.
“Come quickly, my eldest son,” said his mother pulling him inside. “It’s almost Sabbath.”

22 comments:

Carina said...

Looks like someone didn't read to the end of the post, did they?

The novel I'm trying to write this month is about Berlin of '33-'34, so this struck me immediately.

Alisa Callos said...

I loved this! What a twist at the end! It makes you stop and think. It was true in 1933 and ended so tragically. Could it also be true in 2008? We just don’t know what the future holds. I hope we’ve learned the lessons history offers and can do it better this time round.

paisley said...

so excellently written,,, i had to read it again and again to catch all the subtle nuances...

it makes me hope that the fulfillment of "be careful what you wish for" is not closer than we think......

expertly done..

Granny Smith said...

What a twist! You had me completely in the present until that conclusion. I hope that our change is for the better. At least it is racially inclusive, unlike Hitler's.

aftergrace said...

I got goosebumps! This is quite powerful.

Rosey said...

I really enjoyed this. I clearly have a lot to learn about writing.

Anonymous said...

This is wonderfully written. I was totally caught off guard when I got to the ending. Great stuff.

anthonynorth said...

An exceptional tale with an important hidden meaning and excellent twist.
I never saw that one coming.

totomai said...

a clever ending.

agree with paisley about the line "be careful what you wish for". but sometimes the past is connected with the present, and perhaps the future.

an engaging read

linda may said...

I wasn't thinking ww2 until I read until the end either. Very good and thoughtful.

linda may said...

G'Day me again, the sculpture is outstanding. Congratulate your daughter for me. I hope it survives the drying and firing process with out cracks or damage.I know how risky that is.

Susan Helene Gottfried said...

Definitely thought-provoking. But you don't really think that the change the Americans are anticipating is of the same sort of thing, do you?

Janeva said...

Excellent writing. It is frightening to me that so many of the younger generation hasn't had the experience or teaching to know that unless we know what change we are advocating, we should not embrace it just for the sake of change.

Now I am daily seeing our liberty being eroded and the laws that kept a certain morality in place being replaced with anything goes.

The media can no longer be believed to give us the facts, and when the media becomes a political faction, free speech is an endangered species.

Lilibeth said...

Absolutely what I was trying to say. Thanks for saying it so clearly.

Stan Ski said...

Remembrance services, minutes of silence for those lost at war - and 70 years on from Kristaalnacht.
Lest we forget...

Andy Sewina said...

Phew, great twist, powerful message, a well written and thought provoking piece. it wasn't many years later that a wheelbarrow full of paper money was needed to buy a loaf of bread in that country.

Linda Jacobs said...

Oh, this is inspired! Your writing is amazing! This one will stay with me for a long time!

Anonymous said...

Wow! Great read! I agree with Janeva also
Michelle :)

Terrie said...

Awesome! Well done! Thank you!

Rinkly Rimes said...

What a very clever twist at the end. I didn't expect it.

me said...

the twist at the end is brilliant, definitely a now and then piece!! :)

LeAnn said...

You have a wonderful way of getting a point across by drawing people in with your story telling. You are a gifted as a teacher.