Wednesday, September 8, 2010

charm, feast, robust


Their pizzas were truly a “must”--
Meat-lovers with double stuffed crust,
The feast was quite charming
But, rather alarming,
For my figure became too robust!

14 comments:

Ramesh Sood said...

Keep enjoying Pizzas.. do some exercise.. hey, before you bust.. well it's in lighter vain.. enjoyed it..

Julie Jordan Scott said...

This poem and the photo are both making me way too hungry! It isn't even 9 AM and I just oh-so-sensibly had a bowl of special K!

LOL.

Good work, it WORKED!

My 3ww

Lilibeth said...

Ramesh, I tried to post a comment to your entry but wasn't able to type it for some reason. your story ending was superb.

Vinay Leo R. said...

haha :D what a delicious 3ww u have shared.. YUMM!

Thom Gabrukiewicz said...

I enjoyed this very much. But now I'm hungry for a pizza!

Susannah said...

:-) mmmm that says it all.

Angel said...

Love the poem and it does make me hungry, but didn't you leave feast out?

Lilibeth said...

Yikes! I did leave it out. I'm guessing it fell out when I tweaked the limerick. Thanks for pointing it out so I could fix it promptly...which I did.

Amity said...

It's too tempting Lilibeth, I wouldn't mind getting robust, thing is, I should feast!

Fulfilling take Lilibeth and so tempting this is! I suddenly felt hunger pangs! :)

gautami tripathy said...

I am drooling..LOL!

commas in the pauses

Jeeves said...

Hahaha.....Yummy they look

Roshelle said...

being gluten free now one full year... this is the thing I miss the most!!!! aaaahhhh, to sink my teeth into a pie just exactly like this one.... *sigh*

when we're feeling tired and wanting to grab a bite out, and being bored with the same places we go now (after the new diet), we tease each other about going to Pizza Hut for a meat lovers, deep dish pizza.

Anonymous said...

An absolutely yummy treat of words!

aftergrace said...

Yikes! About 50 points on my Weight Watcher diet!